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Effort.

Effort is a campfire on a December night in Northern Michigan – you MUST constantly feed it or you will freeze. The effort of writing a book will grow cold if you don’t feed your mind the kindling of research and allow the flames of inspiration to change the effort into a story.

Print this out and post it on your wall or in your notebook.

As you can see, there are several days – sometimes a week – between my posts. I’m writing all the time between here and there and in the moments between lessons as I homeschooling my children. How does my schedule help you in your writing, you ask? Never give up, I say. The effort is a marathon, not a sprint. Even though there are kids and diapers and cross country meets, there is time to work on the craft of writing. Between meal planning, shopping and prep, there are moments to read. Before the sun rises, you can sneak out for a walk outside and listen to an audio book.

It’s now nap time for my youngest, so the house is quiet, giving me that necessary space to think. My older daughters are cleaning the kitchen before they finish their school work and leave for cross country practice. They take an active role in my success as a writer and I thank them for it. (So this is for you, girls! I love you and I thank you for being exactly who God made you to be!)

Sometimes the effort of writing is more than finding the time or the space…it’s leaping that tall mountain: Mount  Writer’s Block (lovingly called Mt. Block Head by locals), located in the Valley of Emptiness, navigated successfully with a map. Who has that map? Can we just use the North Star?

Writer’s block isn’t as much of  a block as it is a detour…an Andes mountain bus detour along a road without a guard rail led by a driver sipping on Jack Daniels. Not pretty – or perhaps the opening scene for a cliffhanger (pun intended). Writer’s block leaves a writer scattered on the rocks below, lamenting the short writing career and off to the hereafter in search of the next thing. Learn to recognize a derailed writing project and find a way to get behind the wheel. For me, my map, my North Star is research.

From my own experiences, when I hit a wall in a story, I return to my research and always find a solution. When writing about a scene that takes place in the desert, my research can vary from reading picture books set in the American Southwest to watching documentaries about deserts. Other times my struggles are with the flow of sentences and structure of the story and I turn to books about writing and my writing magazines. Research can also include reading blogs. Note what blogs really impress you and analyze the writing to discover what makes it pop.

To keep the fuel of effort hot:

  • take a little of that writing conference money and buy a subscription to Writer’s Digest, Poets and Writer’s, or the like. Study the genre you write. Children’s writer? Read Calliope House, Ladybug, Highlights. Literary? Glimmer Train and the hundreds of e-zines.
  • Go to the library and borrow Elizabeth Berg’s book on writing (I’d include the title, but I loaned it out), Donald Maass’ Writing the Breakout Novel Workbook. Try out Stephen Kings book On Writing. Need help with query letters and submissions? Noah Lukeman’s First Five Pages. For the most entertaining resource for writing query letters, visit: http://www.queryshark dot com
  • Listen to books on tape. Hear the story and the dialogue. Although the voice of each character is performed by the same person, intonation of the actor and the speech patterns from the author create an individual. Do your characters have that same level of individualism?
  • Now record yourself reading your own story. Then listen to it without reading along. You’ll be amazed at the mistakes and weak areas of your writing as you read it into the recorder and you’ll discover undercurrents of strengths and weaknesses as you listen. This is time consuming, but worth every minute.
  • Attend an author visit and book signing. Seek answers to questions about writing that pester you. What better way to stay motivated than to meet an accomplished writer?
  • Develop thick skin and join a writing group (check your local library for meeting times). Remember that all critiques are opinions and you can pick and choose which opinions improve your writing and which suggestions are better swept under the rug.

It’s true that no one will hold your hand during this venture. I do pray that you have someone cheering you on. Keep on keeping on. The effort will be worth it. It always is.

 ”I wish I hadn’t worked so hard to make this dream come true” said No One, Ever!

Bonus “E” word:

Evolution. The more you write, the more your true style will emerge. Logic tells us no style can be born without a mentor. Since J.R.R. Tolkien is no longer with us and I will likely never meet Madeleine L’Engle or Kathi Appelt, I must use their writing to learn as a guide toward greatness. Keep reading great literature. Find good stories with descriptions that create images so strong you forget you are reading.

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“Write drunk. Edit Sober.” – Ernest Hemmingway

I love this quote. Not because I wish to indulge in a drink nor am I trying to encourage anyone to drink heavily and call it creative fuel, but I like the idea of writing without the constraints of soberness.

At some point, every writer hears the advice: write without editing. Hemmingway’s drunken writing implies the same thing – that when we are free from the burdens of ‘behaving’ we do memorable things. When we write without trying to behave or follow the rules of writing, we create something memorable. Sometimes the result is fabulous…othertimes, not so much. But writing freely seems far safer.

That is what makes a story great – crossing a line into new territory, finding a new way to spin a tale, creating a plot twist so tasty the success of the scene feeds you for months.

My issue with this idea of free writing is the ‘free’ part. It’s in my blood to follow the rules. My creative mind does have limits – but I prefer to think of those limits as tiers of imaginative storytelling; the more practice I have the more freedom I experience.

It’s like taking pictures in this digital age: shoot many pictures, then crop, adjust the color, the focus and add text.

For example, this:

with a little crop and color can become:

or:

The writing equivalent to picmonkey.com is the red pen, a discerning eye, an honest writing partner and excellent samples of literature.

A recent scene I worked on started with blurry logic and unfocused placement.

Yeah, I know. Ick!

I took the scene and slowed it down, increasing the tension, cueing in on the focus and creating a much more palatable piece. It became apparent that I needed to include the main character in the description. Here’s the latest version:

What I like to have at my disposal are books of those who have bridged new forms of literature, strapping their ropes to the muse of poetry, the master of mystery, becoming a proficient fiction weaver. Here is a short list of books that have zapped my creativity to the next level. These tales have left me breathless and standing in line to buy the next book by these authors.

The Underneath, Kathi Appelt; A poetic masterpiece that changed the way I view trees, cats and hummingbirds forever.

The Lord of the Rings, J.R.R. Tolkien; It’s a classic. Not a surprise that I absolutely love the rich language and description. Some say they feel bogged down by the length of the description. I like the leisurely stroll through the words…reminds me of Sunday afternoon drives through the country.

To Kill a Mockingbird, Harper Lee; Opened the nation’s eyes to injustice. Opened my eyes to the power of a well-written novel. Plus it has a rabid dog, a recluse, and a spunky kid…what’s not to love?

The Never Ending Story, Michael Ende; I was given a copy for Christmas when I was in the seventh grade and I spent the next two days reading. Will probably spend the rest of my life searching for the book that Sebastian read.

Inkheart, Inkspell and Inkdeath by Cornelia Funke;  A story within a story within a story. Literary genius. Read it. You will not be disappointed.

The Shack, William P. Young; A difficult subject matter handled beautifully with the Trinity present in a surprising way. A self-published success story.

So, set down the drink, pick up a book and dive into the pages. When you pick up your pen let the essence of a story flow through without the restrictions of rules. Notice the scenes that slow down and up the tension, the suspence. Duplicate it in your own writing. Take a scene that rushes and do a frame-by-frame in writing.

Taking that into your own improvement, slow down and read great stories. Take it chapter by chapter. Then pracitce. The pay-off will be well worth the time and effort.

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Lord of Autumn

Lord of Autumn (Photo credit: JimmyMac210)

 

Fall is my favorite season, especially now that I’m an adult (side note: my age says I’m all grown up, but I’m still waiting to feel like I have it all together!). As a child, the fall season meant a return to school and served as an open door to winter. Now, Fall is harvest time. After months in the garden planting, weeding, watering, and beating back mosquitoes, the tomatoes are ripe and the melons are ready. Pea pods drip off the vine and sunflower heads bow to teh close of the growing season.

Fall is now the ‘canning’ season, a whole new level of gardening that makes weeding look like a walk through a warm summer rain. Hot pots of water for blanching, skinning tomatoes, shucking peas, timing the water canner and always scalding my arms – that is the joy of canning (written with much sarcasm). But when the work is done, my shelves are filled with beautiful jars of preserved fruits, vegetables and venison. I can approach winter with a sense of accomplishment, knowing that should the power go out, should the economy claim our income, we would not starve.

Writing is much the same. A seed of an idea is planted, I weed out the subplots that confuse the reader, water the story with patience and hard work, beat back the droning buzz of nay-sayers, and finally harvest a completed story. But then the real work starts: submitting to agents and publishers. I prep my work with a clean query letter, a sweet-syrupy chapter-by-chapter synopsis, and a sample of my work. I feel burned by the scalding lack of a personal touch from the form rejections, but the need to fill my shelves with the finished product of my work drives me forward.

My bookshelves hold one completed and published book and I love to see it standing there next to C.S. Lewis, Madeleline L’Engle and Kathi Appelt - a few of the authors who inspire me to write (if you haven’t read Kathi’s The Underneath, stop what you are doing and go get it now! You will never regret it!) I look at my book and know that if I were snuffed out today, I’ve left my children a piece of a story of which I’m very proud. They will see their mother’s story between the lines of every story I write; for just as we can’t walk through life without leaving a footprint, neither can a writer tell a tale without leave a trace of herself on the page.

We harvest what we sow. Words, vegetables, love…it’s all what life thrives upon.

C. S. Lewis' house (The Kilns)

C. S. Lewis' house (The Kilns) (Photo credit: MikeBlyth)

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